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Dancer in the dark.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Very nice work. In your photographs of children, you display their inner innocence and force, but also a more serious side to them, this one too, has this feeling to it due to the macro along with the black and white.

The girl herself is beautiful. The angle, the facial expression and lighting are great, BUT her awkward posture of having leaned her face towards her shoulder made her body seem strangely mutated at a strange angle. I would've advised you had told her to not shrug her shoulder.

Her hair looks lovely, very silky, natural by its movement, and since they are fair they emphasize her face more in the darkness of the background.

All in all, fairly well done, you showed beauty in an everyday life pose, though as I said before, I would've suggested you had changed her posture a little <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/> Have a nice day and keep up the great work!