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Submitted: April 6, 2012
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The only momentby *nondani

Photography / People & Portraits / Expressive

Moment of truth.

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Model: ~GirlYouLost2Cocaine

Critique by ~elenakaya Apr 8, 2012, 3:19:03 PM

Well, I'm not a professional but I think that this photo represents a perfect combination of poetry, passion and love...

It has a real story in it, it's created in a unique way, when you see it it's like it's speaking to you... it really tells a beautiful love story. Anyway this is my opinion, that is how I felt when I saw you photo. Thank you for asking for my opinion after all I'm just an ordinary girl who is very passionate when it comes to photography and I hope that this will be a satisfying answer for you

Hope you will share your opinion about some of my photos too, It will be good to see a comment of a professional because it will really help my work , because these are my first steps in the world of photography

Thanks again

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Critique by ~laraapatel Apr 7, 2012, 8:10:40 AM

Stunning! Usually I'm inclined to combine complementary colors but the blue and yellow primary colors just create such a perfect balance with her skin tone and the brown of her hair that I'd say the photo is just about perfect.

Her pose is also beautify. It captures a gentle, self-reflecting atmosphere that I think is hard to acheive. It usually just look contrived (something in the hands and the eyes) but this model and yourself seem to have a very comfortable raport.

My only point suggestion might be to crop a bit of the bottom. Rather than capturing where the hip tapers off and flattens, I would probably try out cropping such that the indentation of her waist is where the photograph ends. It creates a more cyclic path for the eye to follow. Otherwise (and I say this after looking long an hard at the photo so this might just be the result of over analysising) my eye drifts down to where there's a slight highlight on the curve of her belly and then trails right off the page and I have to draw my eye's up again.

That's all nitpicking though. I love the piece just as it is even with the belly drift